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I made some changes, considering several suggestions.

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Overall, I would say that this is an attractive piece of design, particularly for your end users who are looking for your site for a particular reason. As someone who works on websites all day, though, and even more relevant, as someone who spends a lot of time in the designs and interfaces gallery here at DA, it's not exactly what I would consider groundbreaking.

That being said, it doesn't necessarily have to be groundbreaking, and looking at it in that light it's pretty solid. The content is easy to follow and cleanly presented, and the navigation is obvious (even if I think the header is a bit tall, at 240px). I definitely like that you've included a secondary nav at the bottom of the pages, which is something that not many people do any more when they use images to build their nav.

I would say that aside from the use of reflected images and abstract swirly brushes, both of which I consider to be a bit overused now (despite being guilty of it myself from time to time), you've got the makings of a successful site here!
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Oh this is nice to look at. Although there seems to be quite a few spacing issues with the layout. Like the spaces between the content boxes are all entirely different sizes, it would look much better with a uniform sized space between borders. Also the header text should be a little down and to the right. Oh, just a personal thing, but I think the content boxes would look nicer without the drop shadow.

Other than those few things, it's a really nice design and definitely a good improvement from your previous work. :)
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Waou! Thank you so much for your comment. That helps me a lot :):) My best friend told me exactly the same thing about the spacing issues! I will work on it :) Thanks.

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